Modernity Poem by DOMINIC PREMPEH

Modernity

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There is a new community
This new community knows no night
The new community is fast and very smart
The new community is tireless
And the new community is entirely sleepless

The new community calls itself city
Here, the living and the dead scramble for space
Here, man bets even his blood for property
And fights for every available space of land
And the new community calls this modernity

(Dec.,2015; Ofoase)

Tuesday, January 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: change,city,crazy,despair,fear,future,greed,grief ,modern,people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ripper Jones 05 January 2016

Very nice poem Prempeh. Every line counts. A poem to be expanded upon I think, so an 8, Happy New Year.

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Prempeh Dominic 05 January 2016

Thanks Stuart, yes it can be expanded...and I will. I promise you.

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