Moments Of Distraction Poem by Sug Elsenussi

Moments Of Distraction

Rating: 5.0


My thoughts creates scenes,
pictures of motion,
A whole lot of animation,
oh moments of distruction!

My Best sinner,
Is my most inner,
The time killer,
Is the worst winner,
This is the End. Revolution.

Moments of distruction!
From the light of the sun,
I shine lyk a star,
My happiness is near,
My sorrows are far.
For death I fear, Indeed; moments of distruction.

For my hopless state,
Is my dead vision,
What my heart aches for.
Isn't my greatly desires.
Oh moments of destruction.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 July 2011

It was a wonderful poem composed with great skill. Fine imagery. Congratulations! Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 1. Thanks in advance. Warmest regards Akmal

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