Moon Poem by roushan banu

Moon

Rating: 5.0


U look soo beautiful above.......
People say stars add beauty to U........
But as for me U add beauty to stars......
when i just look at U...
U give me a peace of mind........

Why are U soo far
From me..................
Why can't U come and play
With me...................

I can't touch U from below here
But one day for sure i will try to reach U there.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammed Albalushi 31 January 2009

I can't touch U from below here But one day for sure i will try to reach U there.i love moon 2, well write dear

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C. P. Sharma 31 January 2009

Your poem has the fragrance of innocence. CP

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Mimi Fakhira 09 February 2009

Beautiful write and a simple flow. Totally love it!

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Eyan Desir 07 February 2009

Hmmm, that a good poem i like the way u keep the poems simple easy 2 read, nice

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ata khan 07 February 2009

Beautiful. It reminds me of a pashto couplet. When i think of you, i look at the moon thinking that you are looking at it too: -)

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Vinod Kumar 05 February 2009

Real unity work, thanks and hope to write more++10++

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Fiona Davidson 05 February 2009

Lovely write Roushan...thank you...Fi...10++

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