Moonlit Face Poem by Baharak Barzin

Moonlit Face

Rating: 5.0


moonlit face turns toward me
well, I would not be any better
cause
I found the way, I've been seeking for a lifetime

Tuesday, December 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Feipeng Shang 25 January 2018

Quite alluring title...... :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 January 2018

A good attempt in the chapter of love, Baharak. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Daniel Brick 19 December 2017

Your poem is so suffused with feeling it needs few words. In fact, additional words would only distract from the poem's purpose which is to show gratitude, not talk about it, but to let it shine in its own glory, just like the Moonlit Face which shines over the poem just by being named. Of course, there is an unstated but obvious point being made: You will be soon walking down the way you have found. But that will the subject of future poems!

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