More Than The Stars. Poem by bethany jeffreys

More Than The Stars.

Rating: 4.5


More than the Stars.

We are human, so fragile so breakable,
But when you entered my life, it was unmistakable.
I was depressed,
But now I am blessed.
Happy is my new name,
Joyful is our new game.
They say, “Love is patient, Love is kind, ”
We’ll show them what love is in no time.
He never forgets what should be remembered,
He looks at me, oh so tender.
Before you entered my life,
My sky was a moonless night.
Now my sky is lit,
By your splendorous compliments.
I love you more than the stars,
You are my happiness near and far.

-Bethany Jeffreys

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allan O 07 November 2009

another beautiful poem...you have a very fine talent beth....thank you ~^..^ perhaps if i request you might read my one called Revelations...i would be honored to have your comment....thanks again ~^..^

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Steven Aragon 05 November 2009

That was a sweet sentiment...i loved the 'before.........moonless night' line. that was sexy. wonderful write! flowed very well.

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