mystic quest awes as inspired tomorrow
myth redounds to wonder over desire
sweet breeze slowly baffles thirst
hope awakens own quantum universe
flower bloomed in the era of old
as of now by its grace of beauty too
is it not same flower by zest of aroma?
beauty of grace besmears with divinity
does today smack of tomorrow?
hope and despair twins of truancy
history yet never heaves eternity
just wind blows across passage of time
does innocence past reflects upon perpetuity?
just as right and wrong perpetrate by moments
when spectra dynamics resolve depth of silence
mist seemingly awaits redemption by sun rays
nice and lovely thought provoking poem. it has depth and purity of your thoughts. thanks for sharing. take care
Hope is an important emotion, a very well composed piece, left me thinking, 10 Lynda xx
Hope as; mortality demands can only be realised by life and the living == and you write in some depth on this subject with wonderful imagery.......10 from Fay...
‘…does today smack of tomorrow? /hope and despair twins of truancy…’ Indeed a Vedic concept where there is hope there is despair and vice versa Holy Gita teaches us to be dispassionate otherwise we’ll be dys-passionate = experience painful passion… May be in your subconscious Vedic [Gita too] vibes are bubbling for your Indian origin…and aptly appropriately reflected with thru exact poetic aperture. Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK PS May be concept of past present and future are highly relative in relation to Maha-Kala [Time Immemorial] niv
The Role of Divine Grace in the Soteriology of Sankaracarya ''a philosopher of any merit has a committed view and is devoted to a coherent elaboration of a main thesis, which in Advaita is the ontological reality of Brahman alone. Epistemology or how one understands oneself in the lived world or even the status of the lived world itself are of secondary importance, not figuring seriously in the ultimate analysis. Having stated his thesis in the introduction to the Brahmasutra (BS) commentary, where he draws a distinction between reality and non-reality, Sankara expects us to apply that understanding of Advaita in his different works. Sankara builds his Advaita in his commentaries in keeping with the hermeneutical principles of ekavakyata (unity of meaning from beginning to end) and upakrama-parakrama nyaya, where the initial statements carry more weight than the later ones, in order to drive home his Advaita philosophy. He also gives ample proof of his grasp of the other darsanas (schools of Hindu thought) , and he often buttresses his arguments with arguments drawn from these schools. It is therefore not easy to read Sankara in a linear fashion.'' in this context the poem is excellent....10+++++ from me
a deeply well penned poem...contemplation while searching for a lasting hope...the history is a place where we will never meet eternity...yesterday is a past way for today and today is yesterday for tomorrow...the dreams..the hopes can prolong our life beyond the end of life..immortality when we create some thing which carry our beating heart and thinking mind...few words which could last canbe an eternal hope for the dreamers and the seekers..10+++++
Mystical search for enlightenment proceeds in deep mystery like the mist waiting for dawn to clear itself the next day! Interesting poem for lovers of mysticism!
Very well written piece, i like the way you went about this, wonderful penning
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hope should never comes last..it's the only word to regain, the only word to recover, the only word for courage, , , so, there should be no mortality of hopes..hope, ...it is the best element to live..i like this piece Dr kar, hope my words fit the thought.. naizz