Moth And A Flame Poem by Asif Baloch

Moth And A Flame

Rating: 5.0


To the distance as I see
A beauty dancing so gracefully
Smiling lovingly with inviting glare
Golden hairs and beautiful face
Made me drunk and I forgot everything else
I took a flight on stumbling ride
Reached in front of her and sung a rhyme

“Thou art as I see what a beauty
Golden hairs waving in a breeze
Once felled in your lovely eyes
I kept lying and shalt never rise”

She smiled and said to me with saddened face
Tears in her eyes and yearning grace
I burn my inner self to spread a light
Helping those who are scared of dark tides
I’m symbol of peace, love and literacy
They don’t cares what went through me
No one ever loves me it’s written in my fate
Giving away peace in return hate what I get
I burn and burn all night long
Staying alone and die on my own

Who said no one loves you
I am here and was made for you
I born everyday to die every night
To hug you, love you and hold you tight
I love only thee it is my kind destiny
Sacrificing my life just for your one kiss of eternity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 25 October 2008

wow a beautiful poem so much love and romance sooooooooo touching specially-- 'Who said no one loves you I am here and was made for you I born everyday to die every night To hug you, love you and hold you tight I love only thee it is my kind destiny Sacrificing my life just for your one kiss of eternity' +++++++++++++10 asif and A++ I loved your poem goes to my fav list. regards anju

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Seema Aarella 25 October 2008

'To live every day and die every night'...one such moment of realisation of pure love is worth a lifetime of togetherness....a well expressed imagery and emotions...a 10 from me...

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Sandra Fowler 25 October 2008

Selfless love beautifully expressed. Very touching. Warm regards, Sandra

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Egi David Perdana 26 October 2008

a beautiful piece thanx

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*Trusting You* 27 November 2008

Sacrificing my life just for your one kiss of eternity that is such a cute line... I really like it. good poem. Becca

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

that was a wonderful poem...................

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 01 November 2008

well well well......what a refrshing piece that was aijaz....soft gentle love...with hope..something youve done for the first time i think...and you did it well the sadness had hope and fresh lie bursting through.

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Antonio Liao 30 October 2008

what a reflected poem.... you almost cried my heart... thank you.... a warm feeling engulf myself.... a wonderful piece indeed.... your one of each kind

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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 October 2008

Deeply insightful poem. Enjoyed reading........10

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