louis rams

Freshman - 946 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

******************mother*********************1979 - Poem by louis rams

who brought you into this world
showing you love, joy, affection.
who is your days, and who is your nights
and for her you would proudly fight.

she is not like any other, for she is your mother.

who will tend to you when you're hurt?
who will wipe away your tears
when you're down and out?

you guessed it right
she's really out of sight
your mother.

who gives you the right advice
when everything else has failed?
who is the one that used to wipe your tail
who is the one who used to clean your face.

who is the one that can't be replaced
your mother
who explained love and ecstacy
who would give her life for me.

who do you ask 'is it'
no other than your mother.


Comments about ******************mother*********************1979 by louis rams

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (5/30/2013 4:06:00 PM)

    lovely thoughts about mother. The one and only so nice. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (1/12/2010 12:16:00 PM)

    ‘Since God couldn’t be present everywhere He created ‘Mothers’.

    This my father realized by marrow while my Granny was in coma for 49 days in her 4trt cerebral attack…

    And Sir your poem has that diction and postulation…
    10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,746 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/3/2009 9:01:00 PM)

    who brought you into this world
    showing you love, joy, affection.
    who is your days, and who is your nights
    and for her you would proudly fight.
    ask any motehr you know in your life who will have everything on her finger tips.. all caring sentiments with great sacrifice....love poem with vivd description....10

    read mine o, mother..momi miss u.. mom i still cry..moher and i wept... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (9/1/2009 10:04:00 PM)

    a lovely poem on mother...who can ever replace her (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 142 Points Joseph Poewhit (9/1/2009 9:50:00 PM)

    Nothing like good old MOM (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 1, 2009



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