Rema Prasanaa


! ! MOUNTAINS AND MY DAWN!


Mountains call me from mystic terrains
a prayer comes from divine heart
wild flowers fall on discreet dreams
dews on garden flowers
fragrance brings placid breeze
docile numinous dreams arrive
clouds fly on confused confines
tremors shrivel on stiff caverns
listen, calm my ocean dear
hide you treasures of mine so deep
wait, wait I come back soon
impede not until I liberate my soul
allow me to go on my part of earth
allow me to reach my dawn in style
mountains call me from distant terrains
allow me to walk till I climb its peak
allow me to embrace my dawn in grace.




© Rema Prasanna
August 2,2008

Submitted: Saturday, August 02, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, August 06, 2008

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Comments about this poem (! ! MOUNTAINS AND MY DAWN! by Rema Prasanaa )

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (8/13/2008 12:34:00 AM)

    a lovely mystical poem, full of imagery.10

    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 302 Points Indira Renganathan (8/8/2008 11:51:00 PM)

    Emotions and nature..you are an expert.Good write 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raj Nandy (8/8/2008 11:04:00 PM)

    A beautiful piece of creative poetry - straight out of the workshop of your creative
    mind!
    -Raj Nandy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 200 Points Palas Kumar Ray (8/3/2008 12:44:00 PM)



    And
    Rema, You remain a wonderful devoted soul in this poem too. Wish your wishes are
    all fulfilled by the deity and you see the most comfortable Dawn soon.




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  • Rookie - 0 Points Emancipation Planz (8/2/2008 11:42:00 PM)

    Rema, I know where you went for this one... and...YoU... delivered...
    I wonderful climb to your sun rising.. aroha xx (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,709 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (8/2/2008 9:49:00 PM)

    You are a stellar imagist, Rema....and your inveterating passion for the pictorial write, is both compelling, and everpresent, in this piece....Imagery to a Writer(like myself) , but more especially to a bonifide Poet(such as yourself) is as paramount, and capturing, as illusion to a master magician.Solid work, indeed!

    ~ FjR ~
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