Moving On Poem by Louie Thompson

Moving On

Rating: 5.0


You don't know what it's like
to feel like you're the only one.
I feel like my life has cast a shadow,
and now there's no more sun.

I feel so alone
and no one is there.
Sometimes I feel like my life
is too much to bare.

I don't want to do this
or take this anymore.
So I'm leaving this place,
and shutting the door.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 23 April 2006

I can assure you Louie, when you do close that door, another will be sure to open for you. Nice crisp work. I hope to being doing the same as your title suggests, quite soon now! 10 from mover and shaker! Tai

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