Muddy Girl And A Barbie Doll Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Muddy Girl And A Barbie Doll

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She made a doll out of vegetables and fruits
Her father was a vegetable vendor
She was enjoying the moment
Playing with it without worries
A car stopped by and order came
Give me this and this
The girl looked up and saw her counterpart
Sitting with a real Barbie doll
While she was looking with astonishment
Her father sold the barbie doll (all vegetables and fruits) .

Thursday, September 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,love,love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 21 November 2015

Touching story in your nice poem. Good job. Asim

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Sanjukta Nag 24 September 2015

Oh speechless.... economical difference makes a huge difference on thoughts as well as on life style.. and it is wonderfully expressed by the two little girls' state of mind, representing different values of different background.

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Rajnish Manga 24 September 2015

A beautiful poem interspersed with a wonderful imagery and a story makes it a sheer pleasure to read. Hats off to the skillful treatment of human emotions. Thanks.

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