Muddy Rainy Water Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Muddy Rainy Water
Road passing beside broken building,
It has seen green creepers and grass,
Hollow road has kept rainy water inside,
Mud has made suspension with rain water.
Rain drops falling from sky are dancing
Forming clear bubbles across the land,
On heart of muddy water art dazzles,
Beauty is noticed with punctual mind,
Tyre marks of vehicles rolled on mud,
We see clearly water remains inside,
A rainy day is a day of joy to feel.
Rain has come, mud has become rainy,
Green pigments are gained by plants,
Broken walls still stand to revive,
Renovation is expected in near future,
Brown muddy water in this lonely road,
It is waiting for visitors of rain,
No pain and no anxiety is seen at all,
There is hope to become clear soon
Or there is hope of evaporation,
Mud will remain in road turning into sand,
Water will be vapour by sun's drinking,
But now it is raining with joyful mood,
Muddy rainy water we see in road.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,19 July 2018. All rights reserved.
Joy of mud and rain tops and bottoms this haiku. Joy of mud and rain
A poet must be able to depict a scene in words. You have done this admirably in this poem.+++10
Seeing what is not seen by everybody is what the poet does. You have done it Kumar. You make us to like muddy water. Thank you.
Mud has become rainy.. wonderful. A magnificent poem dear poet.5 stars.
A rainy day is a day of joy to feel The pool of muddy water - why it is there? Nicely dealt in the poem.
Here unfortunately the roads are like rivers! Schools and Colleges are given holidays! Rain wreaks havoc! Reading your poem, I feel your land is blessed with enough rain! A beautiful poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Only a lovely mind like Kumarmani's could make a pretty poem out of muddy rain water! I love your personification of the sun, with its drinking. Truly a beautiful poem.