Muriel,1941 Poem by Wild Bill Balding

Muriel,1941

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You forgot if it was day or night
until you breathed the blitz-burnt air
outside at watch's end.
Weather, seasons, all the same,
duty was duty,
you grinned and bore it,
and kept on pushing
counters across a chart
unthinking, unfeeling,

except when the counter
stood for his convoy,
en route to Singapore,
and you were not
allowed to tell him
you knew where
he was ending up,

though,
in fact,
you only
thought
you knew.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
silver phoenix 01 August 2008

how im glad to not have live trough such rough years, excellent writting btw! Please check out some of my work if you do have time, i started writing little time ago and just found this website around 2 days ago, id be glad to have more rating and perhaps a comment. Thankyou, Kilian.

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Lynda Robson 09 May 2008

A look into the past when the world was at war, was Muriel somone you knew I wonder, a very captivating piece of writing, thanks, Lynda xx

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