roses know
they are beautiful
hence, keep thorn guards
rivers run
with whirling arrogance
till death in ocean
green apple, so sweet
betraying colour inferences
like a child prodigy
six pack muscles, half nude
...not a machoman walking on ramp
...fisherman at swamp
Love your openings in this peice Sathya - - the imagery used is excellent - and it opns up to the main body of the poem which has it's own surprise ending too.... very well put together........ from Fay a 10
Ammmmmazing! Used allegories are multi-faced Rose oh rose! 10++
superb observation...especially the last lines...........good write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
awsome excellent keeping it real and true nice work