My Angel Flew Away Poem by Rafia Jones

My Angel Flew Away

Rating: 5.0


My butterfly’s a moth
My sparkle turned to gray
My sunshine is a heavy rain
My angel flew away

My sunset disappeared
My safety turned to fears
My dreams turned to reality
My happiness into tears

My mirror smashed to pieces
My face is now a mess
My laugh is just a sob
My promises mean even less

My pretty dress is torn
My glitter fell as dust
My prince turned to a toad
My passion left to lust

My lake turned to a swamp
My ladybird’s a spider
My river went all dry
My words cant even find her

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salir Airosa 09 September 2006

Another great poem, with unique form. I often enjoy experimenting with different forms of poetry, but my attempts are not half as good as yours. :)

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Melvina Germain 05 September 2006

Very creative, I like this a lot, I like the look of it as well with (MY) at the beginning of each sentence. I wonder if that is a certain form of poetry, I like it very much.----Melvina

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