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Hello Love Hello Life
Please I hope your Listening
I have fallen, to missing you
I have fallen far from your world
Now in my own world,
trying to build the path to right
The war I fight against myself
The war between pride and love
The war for you is all I have known
Now tired in this fight
I still storm to find
Still fight to find the better half of
My soul
I still get lost in a woken dream
As I daze and swim through the beauty
And look at the painting as
Things should be
As I ponder in to night
I Plead to you look past
Life vanity, Look past what
Perception wants.
Walk this path we once shared
Everything I cant be
Is everything you are
You are everything I desire to be
The war for you is all I have known
What is left is a tired soul
Lucas Vincent Desmond
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Thursday, February 14, 2008 |
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Comments about this poem (My Better Half
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Lucas Vincent Desmond
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marvin brato (2/14/2008 4:14:00 AM)
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Quite romantic Lucas, opposite always attracts and bond well in life! Well penned sir, a 10.
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