My Big Brother Poem by Theyuz Banda

My Big Brother

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Day by day I think of you,
How can all of this be true?
I can't believe you're really gone,
I still can't accept it,
Even after so long.
Just the thought of you makes me cry, I never even got the chance to say goodbye.
Every picture, every letter,
I don't know if it will ever get better.
I always smell your familiar scent,
It makes me think of all of the times we've
spent. I know we didn't always get along,
And every time we talked, it would always
go wrong.
So many things I never got to say,
I never imagined you'd ever be so far away.
You were my brother, And I loved you like no other.
In my heart you'll always be,
You'll be my guide and help me see.
I'll never forget your soothing voice,
I would take your place if I had a choice.
But now I have to let you rest, Although without you my world's a mess.
I miss you with all of my heart,
I wish we never had to part.
I know you're always by my side,
So now I guess this is my goodbye...

Thursday, October 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Loss of my big brother.
Written: 10th of October,2014.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theyu Steve Banda 13 October 2014

thanks bro for your comment

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Walani Ndhlovu 13 October 2014

Wow! This poem is so live and clear. The theme and the imagery are a perfect match. Keep it up!

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