David DeSantis

Rookie (01/29/85 / Utica, NY)

**My Birthday Poem by David DeSantis


Another day
as any other.
Yet on this day
I was born.

The Sun shone in Aquarius,
as perhaps I should be happy.
But the moon
she was a Pisces.

And the two-
we never go together.

Submitted: Thursday, January 29, 2009
Edited: Monday, February 16, 2009

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Original Unknown Girl (2/3/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    Happy Birthday to you David, never worry about the pisces, they are lovely but their fish always swim in opposite directions! Tricky to catch them and keep a hold. ; -) HG xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Onelia Avelar (2/3/2009 5:31:00 AM)

    Happy B-day David! I like your creative astro-logical point of view to your B-day. According to the Greek mythology, Aquarius was 'cup-bearer to the Gods' often painted as a man spilling water, one who can not keep the fishes in the water :)) Funny piece of you, nice to see you writing again.
    Best wishes, one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie '...' ... (2/2/2009 3:37:00 AM)

    Just imagine.. another month out and you'd be a leap year baby! ! ! Belated happy happy to you... I missed you for ages... ok.. I go find your poems and put them back up now... aroha Deana xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (1/29/2009 2:41:00 PM)

    You can wait and wait. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anita Atina (1/29/2009 12:19:00 PM)

    Hey David, happy birthday! Do you know why birthdays should be celebrated? (Report) Reply

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