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My Brother Julian. - Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

my brother julian is weird,
but hes not one to be feared,
burgers and fries is all he eats,
loves video games
but he always cheats,
sleeps all night sleeps all day,
he goes to church but i never heard him pray,
but his nose is special it could smell food a mile away,
he gets crazy and physco thats why i call him violent j,
he loves food like they aint no tommorow,
he eats so fast i sometimes wonder if he swallowed,
hes always first in line to order,
hes favorite food is the ultimate cheeseburger,
hes cool but mostly rude,
but show him your food and violent j will druel.

Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

Comments about My Brother Julian. by JOSE MURGUIA

  • Rookie Cynthia Ulloa (1/2/2010 3:18:00 AM)

    ahahaha! ! que chistoso! ! sounds like me haha, .
    thats kinda like my x bf too and ironically tambien se llama julian! xD (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Lady Grace (10/13/2009 1:11:00 AM)

    my you want to spread and let others know bout the eating habit of ur bro my dear...well, it is represented in a nice way.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie NoName DeletedAccount (8/20/2009 6:43:00 PM)

    omg haha dude datz how my brother acts 2 haha..nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Whitney t (8/17/2009 5:47:00 PM)

    wow that poem was so funni
    hey I have a bro just like that, but he older
    but great poem and that was very funni! ! ! !
    and bro your bro is crazzzzi to eat like that
    (just kiddin)
    bravo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mari Velazco (8/12/2009 4:52:00 PM)

    wow that kinda reminds
    me of me lol i love food 2 nd
    i can get a little rough sometimes lol
    love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reecey Renee (2/19/2009 10:10:00 PM)

    I love it when poems rhyme.. funny as well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jessica Waskelis (2/13/2009 11:15:00 PM)

    o wow i would love to cook for him man people like him i lov to cook 4 man 4 real its funnie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emily Sleator *His Babey* (2/7/2009 2:54:00 PM)

    lmao very funny! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! my brother just like that that fool is dead! ! hahaha jk (Report) Reply

  • Rookie sumaira (1/19/2009 4:30:00 AM)

    Hey! Your bro will kill u for this hehehe :) nicely writin, funny poem: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Genesis Learny (1/11/2009 10:27:00 PM)

    just hilarious! julian reminds me of so many people! lol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Reihaneh Jalalian (1/8/2009 1:23:00 AM)

    wonderful. hey its not really weird (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 21, 2009

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