Shooting Star...(I Wish) Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

Shooting Star...(I Wish)

Rating: 4.9


I WISH I COULD BRING YOU BACK AND PRESS REWIND,
I WISH I COULD HAVE CHANGED GOD'S MIND,
I WISH I COULD TELL YOU HOW MUCH WE NEED YOU,
I WISH EVERY NIGHT IN MY DREAMS I CAN SEE YOU,
I WISH THIS PAIN DIDN'T FEEL SO DEEP,
I WISH U COULD HAVE AWAKEN FROM THAT FOREVER SLEEP,
I WISH THE TEARS COULD STOP AND NOT FALL,
I WISH HEAVEN HAD A NUMBER SO I CAN GIVE YOU A CALL,
I WISH GOD KNEW HE LEFT US SO SAD,
I WISH YOU KNEW YOU WERE THE GREATEST DAD,
I WISH YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO GROW OLD AND TIRED,
I WISH YOUR LIFE DIDN'T HAVE A DATE TO EXPIRE,
I WISH I COULD HAVE FIXED YOUR BROKEN HEART,
I WISH WE DIDN'T HAVE TO BE THIS FAR APART,
I WISH HEAVEN WASNT THIS FAR,
I WISH I CAN SEE YOU AGAIN
I WISH THIS ON A SHOOTING STAR............


Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

dedicated to my dad (rest in peace)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liz Thaugally 21 September 2009

Jose, A lovely heartfelt poem, howver I hope you do not mind me pointing out a couple of Typo errors HART- Heart and Youre (YOUR) . It just spoils what should be a perfect piece. Well done. Liz

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Tiffany Ann 14 April 2010

i'm sorry about ur dad but i love the poem.

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 26 September 2009

Your Dad must be proud of you. You must have beautiful moment to cherish a life time. I envy you indeed. tks for share

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Tom Fox 26 September 2009

i totally dig this! ....great feeling and flow and intention...! ! ! ...i've got a similar poem called Fed Up...

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Daniel Kim 26 September 2009

great poem! pure touch of your wishing star :)

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Priscilla Knighten 05 December 2021

This poem showed a sad & lonely & unhappy child who shows love & love.

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Binnie Branscomb 25 December 2011

I wish you the best of luck and this poem is very good I like it a lot :)

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Eden Rivera 17 April 2010

This is a good poem. I'm sorry bout your dad.

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Miriam Porras 16 April 2010

i think is really good i feel that way most of the time but i feel that life goes on and even that painfull chapter of your life can and has help u become what you are today things happen for a reason and thats desteny read my poems i just have 6 but u know im only 15 i dont have nothing to write about but i will try to write more bye and good poem luv miriam porras

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Summer H. 14 April 2010

so many people feel this way. you are an amazing poet. there is also a great story and great passion and emotion behind it.

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