Cynthia Carpenter

Rookie - 4 Points (jacksonville, flordia)

My Dark Prince - Poem by Cynthia Carpenter

you brought me out, you healed my pain
but to you there wasnt anything to gain
you did it out of the goodness of your heart
somehow i knew you were the one from the start
you had me from our first little talk
100 miles for you i would walk
my dark prince you resqued me
you pushed away the darnkness and set me free
only to capture and steal my love
maybe it was destined from above
that one day we would meet and finally be together
my dark prince i'll love you forever
as long as you hold my hand through my worst fears
hold me in your arms as i cry my tears
be there for me when i need you the most
at the center of my heart you stood your post
promised to love me for all eternity
come my dark prince and let us be
together forever until we die
together we will be joined in the sky


Comments about My Dark Prince by Cynthia Carpenter

  • (6/29/2016 5:36:00 PM)


    Very pleasing poem. Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day! (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/29/2016 2:52:00 PM)


    Very interesting and amazing poem shared definitely. Having love for dark prince is definitely precious.10 (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (6/29/2016 1:18:00 PM)


    Lovely articulation and expression of feelings about one who brought love in your life. Thanks.
    ....my dark prince you resqued me
    ....you pushed away the darnkness and set me free
    ....only to capture and steal my love
    (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (6/29/2016 7:00:00 AM)


    Excellent poem, inspiring and soothing. Congrats for the poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • (6/29/2016 6:27:00 AM)


    the light we see by is but shadows to truth & love for life while alive. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (6/29/2016 6:59:00 AM)

    I agree

  • (6/29/2016 6:25:00 AM)


    not dark at all nice work (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/29/2016 12:38:00 AM)


    You healed my pain! ! Love and care. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • (9/18/2014 9:37:00 AM)


    Lovely poem from the heart. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Brick (9/4/2014 7:59:00 AM)


    LET US BE TOGETHER UNTIL WE DIE TOGETHER WE WILL BE JOINED IN THE SKY - there is a wonderful expansion of their love in these lines. First it will last until death - that means life long renewal - and their love has a cosmic dimension. These are larger-than-life emotions which take love to a higher plane where (for example) the divorce statistics in the USA are irrelevant. And addressing the beloved as MY DARK PRINCE adds to this gratitude that makes this love untouched by ordinary setbacks and diminishing returns. Long may it prosper! (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (8/8/2014 2:30:00 PM)


    A nice poem, a yearning for love in clear and simple words. (Report) Reply

  • Aries Profanisaurus (5/19/2014 7:17:00 PM)


    Wonderfully done. A love poem pure and true. Every princess needs her prince, dark or not. Maybe like Ying and Yang? Or maybe not. As long as you are right for this person and they are right for you, it's all good. Stay strong (Report) Reply

  • Gary H (1/19/2014 10:21:00 PM)


    Very nice, well done. (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2014 11:21:00 AM)


    very nice............well composed.............I only see love everywhere.............. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (12/19/2013 9:27:00 AM)


    love you for ever, good write, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 19, 2013



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