My Dear Friend Poem by Sahil Sood

My Dear Friend

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Dear friend, stop me, coz i'm in love...
Dear friend, behold me, coz i'm in pain.
My life is on a new turn...
Everything lost and nothing to earn.

Feel the ache i'm going through...
There is no one i trust, except you.
Many criticise, just a few to forgive...
In this flagitious world, how can i live?

Dear friend, encourage me, coz i've lost the will...
Dear friend, guide me, coz i'm out of my way.
Give me strength, give me a reason...
Help me, i cannot survive in this prison.

In a place surrounded by mean people...
I feel so alone and disregarded.
Accompany me with all your attention...
And get me away from this confusion.

Dear friend, answer me, coz i'm tired of praying...
Dear friend, cherish me, coz i'm filled with obsession.
Comfort me as a true friend...
I give up, now i cannot pretend.

All i have, is a wish...
Dear friend,
In this real world...
Someday you exist.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A True friend, with whom we share all our thoughts, pain, joy, sufferings and happiness is hard to find. As mentioned in the poem, in this world of mean people its hard to find a true friend. And sometimes we really desire to have such a friend. So in this poem i express the feelings one have when he feels alone and disregarded. And all he need is a true friend..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 27 November 2012

All I have is a wish. Good poem. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment. Yours Gajanan Mishra

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Jahan Zeb 27 November 2012

Dear Sahil I loved your poem and the thought in it. This a meaningful poem.. But there is a BUT. Everyone here is your true friend. They would give you advice that will raise your morale and your tempo. We all do need true friends. If I have the treasury of choosing my friends the others have to choose theirs. You are a pure soul, good poet and a caring friend. Be yourself and many will find friend in you and they all be your friend. I am the first to offer my friendship to you.

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Yash Shinde 27 November 2012

great thought...............I wish you'll find your friend very soon :)

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Asif Andalib 27 November 2012

Friendship is like wine when it becomes old it becomes better. So be patient you will find your true friends. Anyway I liked your poem

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 November 2012

I can see u hav a lot of friends here. So despite being pensive it is an excellent fine poem so cheer up younger poet bro. And do coment on mine too.

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Heather Wilkins 14 December 2013

a dear friend is the one you can trust. and lucky to have one a good write

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Tristan Love-day 20 October 2013

: ') amazing...u hve a talent, there might be more but writting is one of them, keep it up :)

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Shivani Misra 03 January 2013

I agree.. The world is too selfish and mean.. And all that we need is a true friend on whom we can trust and have faith.. The poem was lovely, keep writing and Sharing.. And sorry for late response :)

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Indranil Bhaduri 03 December 2012

An outcry for getting a real dear friend. Great work. Keep it up.

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Amanda Laurent 28 November 2012

Full of passion and wanting. The last few lines really say it all and make you realize that when you find such a friend, you are truly blessed and should hold onto them tightly!

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