I have a pet, a smart little dachshund
Wherever I go, he follows me always
Watching him wag his tail is fun
Mischievous he is, his antics amaze
When I take him out, he runs and rolls
Truly a bouncing ball of energy
His funny tricks brighten my days
Between him and me is a rare synergy
With his bark, he scares all rodents away
As the stray cat comes in, he is brutally at war
With his paws he enjoys prodding the dying rat
When he is around, life is never a bore
From office, even if I come back late
He will be there to greet me, wagging his tail
He climbs over, licking me from foot to crown
In spontaneity of affection, he does not fail
Indeed he is my prized possession
In our house, he is allowed to roam free
His eyes speak a strange language of love
Bringing into our lives so much of glee
I have a dog that barks and plays almost all day long! Love your poem!
Love is a two way traffic. Nobody recognizes and acknowledges love quicker than a pet. Among all the pets, perhaps, a dog is the most faithful. Loved your fluent poem on love existing between your doggie and the inmates of home. Each stanza provides separate kinds of affectionate gestures and each is a pleasure to read. The poem gets maximum rating from me, a 5*****.
Dog is a faithful animal and it is more faithful than a man. It can save the life of its master. It provides glee. You are lucky that you have a pet that is smart little dachshund. He follows you where ever you go. His funny tricks brighten your days. A beautiful poem on doggie is amazingly delineated. Five stars.
Valsa, I’ve been thinking of you for a week or more as I’m home schooling my ten-year old granddaughter in English Language Arts, and in our current unit on poetry I introduced her to limericks (more on those later) . In this poem you remind me why I’m more a dog than a cat person. And what a beautiful garden in the picture! -Glen
Indeed he is my prized possession In our house, he is allowed to roam free His eyes speak a strange language of love Bringing into our lives so much of glee /// beautiful poem on the pet and love for this animal/// Dog is most loyal animal; sometimes I feel its loyalty to its lord more pure than human to God// great poem like an ODE to the Doggie
They are faithful, loyal and above all caring, a true companion of humans. Nice poem.10***
Lovely poem Valsa. Great to have a pet. And that too, a dog. Ever so loving and faithful. A beautiful photo of you with your pet with lots of pretty flowers in the background. God bless you Valsa! ..........5 Stars
In God's kingdom all creatures have rights ahd freedom to live. In your garden this affectionate pet looks so smart! We Hail To Lord! Lord's garce falls on all!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very true ma'am. Doggie are really great creatures. They really make you feel much better. They become integral to our life. A very beautiful poem ma'am. Though I don't like to keep them with me but I enjoy seeing others enjoy. And the garden is very beautiful.