My Doggie Poem by Valsa George

My Doggie

Rating: 4.9


I have a pet, a smart little dachshund
Wherever I go, he follows me always
Watching him wag his tail is fun
Mischievous he is, his antics amaze

When I take him out, he runs and rolls
Truly a bouncing ball of energy
His funny tricks brighten my days
Between him and me is a rare synergy

With his bark, he scares all rodents away
As the stray cat comes in, he is brutally at war
With his paws he enjoys prodding the dying rat
When he is around, life is never a bore

From office, even if I come back late
He will be there to greet me, wagging his tail
He climbs over, licking me from foot to crown
In spontaneity of affection, he does not fail

Indeed he is my prized possession
In our house, he is allowed to roam free
His eyes speak a strange language of love
Bringing into our lives so much of glee

My Doggie
Monday, October 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dog,love,pet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 19 October 2020

Very true ma'am. Doggie are really great creatures. They really make you feel much better. They become integral to our life. A very beautiful poem ma'am. Though I don't like to keep them with me but I enjoy seeing others enjoy. And the garden is very beautiful.

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Kostas Lagos 19 October 2020

I have a dog that barks and plays almost all day long! Love your poem!

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Khairul Ahsan 19 October 2020

Love is a two way traffic. Nobody recognizes and acknowledges love quicker than a pet. Among all the pets, perhaps, a dog is the most faithful. Loved your fluent poem on love existing between your doggie and the inmates of home. Each stanza provides separate kinds of affectionate gestures and each is a pleasure to read. The poem gets maximum rating from me, a 5*****.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 October 2020

Dog is a faithful animal and it is more faithful than a man. It can save the life of its master. It provides glee. You are lucky that you have a pet that is smart little dachshund. He follows you where ever you go. His funny tricks brighten your days. A beautiful poem on doggie is amazingly delineated. Five stars.

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Kim Barney 21 October 2020

Very nice poem, Valsa! Good pets are just like family.

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Glen Kappy 17 December 2020

Valsa, I’ve been thinking of you for a week or more as I’m home schooling my ten-year old granddaughter in English Language Arts, and in our current unit on poetry I introduced her to limericks (more on those later) . In this poem you remind me why I’m more a dog than a cat person. And what a beautiful garden in the picture! -Glen

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 November 2020

Indeed he is my prized possession In our house, he is allowed to roam free His eyes speak a strange language of love Bringing into our lives so much of glee /// beautiful poem on the pet and love for this animal/// Dog is most loyal animal; sometimes I feel its loyalty to its lord more pure than human to God// great poem like an ODE to the Doggie

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M Asim Nehal 06 November 2020

They are faithful, loyal and above all caring, a true companion of humans. Nice poem.10***

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 November 2020

Lovely poem Valsa. Great to have a pet. And that too, a dog. Ever so loving and faithful. A beautiful photo of you with your pet with lots of pretty flowers in the background. God bless you Valsa! ..........5 Stars

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Budhashaya Behera 30 October 2020

In God's kingdom all creatures have rights ahd freedom to live. In your garden this affectionate pet looks so smart! We Hail To Lord! Lord's garce falls on all!

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