My Father Poem by Amit Kumar

My Father

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. MY FATHER

A baker he is and hard working person
swallowed all pains and shed happiness to me,
never cares of his wishes
busy in making our wishes come true

He got up early at 3O'clock
makes himself busy with floor and sweat
because a baker needs muscular strenth to bake
he works whole day till night.

I have seen him with sweat
felt bad and cried inside for the situation
Why I couldnt be able to help
my father to come out of filthy place?

My father loves his two sons
he did all to make us educated and honoured.
HE never beg others for us but worked hard
to make our life gayful and smooth

I adore my father and I love my father,
for our sake he disowns all
even parents but his soul always remains
with grandparents, always kept them in his heart
LOVE U DAD! ! ! ! ! ! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Its about my feelings towards my father who works hars in his whole life. Once I saw him working hard that makes me feel depressed so i wrote these line.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dev Anand 15 March 2016

a wonderful and touching tribute to your father. dev

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Cigeng Zhang 06 March 2016

This poem is a tribute to your beloved father, very touching. “A baker he is and hard working person swallowed all pains and shed happiness to me, never cares of his wishes busy in making our wishes come true”... From the beginning, you are showing us a devoted and selfless father. A beautiful write. Thank you.

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Amit Kumar 07 March 2016

thank you very much for your appreciation! ! !

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Amit Kumar 27 December 2015

i cant say anything much. ijust love Dad! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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