James Darwin Smith II

Rookie - 160 Points (10/6/74 / San Diego, CA)

My Feeling Of Love Towards You - Poem by James Darwin Smith II

You are my dream when I am awake
You are my passion in which I intake
My love for you has no bounds
You keep my feet on the ground
While my heads up high up in the sky
My love for you makes me fly
I have something to believe in
Yes, I do
It's a sweet beautiful soul
Yes, It's you


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem, Rather simple in structure. But it was the first poem that I have ever shared with others. As long as I have written I never shared anything that I have ever had. So all in all this was an important poem for me.

Comments about My Feeling Of Love Towards You by James Darwin Smith II

  • Rookie - 72 Points Guess Who (6/28/2012 4:40:00 PM)

    Nice Lovely expressed awesome love poem well done
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 28, 2012



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