anjana asok(12 yrs)

Rookie (20/11/1995 / Alappuzha, India)

My First Day At School(***a Real Experience***) - Poem by anjana asok(12 yrs)

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Oh, it came so fast like a speedy train,
in the month of heavy rain,
when the birds of joy just flew away,
and my heartbeat rose up each day.

the vacations were over and,
there was no more time to play in sand,
but of course you know what that was,
it was my school reopening day as it is.

That day morn when I woke up,
thought if i had a ever or hiccup,
lazy and unwilling, of course, of huss,
made it to the waiting bus.

As the speed of bus went high,
i sank back to the seat with a sigh,
at last whe i walked down to school,
i never knew to use what tool.

As my school came closer,
I became more more dozer,
but wait! now that at school i was,
noone knows the tension a girl has.

When i stepped in to my class,
My courage broke like a breaking glass,
but when i found out i wasn't alone,
and found news friends to adorn,
for first school became a heaven!

* when i was going on to my 5th class to a new school. of course i made a lot of friends and my shyness left me and i am now first at school


Comments about My First Day At School(***a Real Experience***) by anjana asok(12 yrs)

  • Rookie - 0 Points Abha Sharma (6/1/2008 5:26:00 AM)

    The narration is very lively and we can identify with it,
    on the first day some children are too enthusiastic and some too reluctant to step in…
    At this age you have penned in good stanzaic form each followed in sequence right from your heart…
    May you make lots of good friends and be always successful in your academics.
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  • Rookie Mayra Mendivil (5/23/2008 10:01:00 AM)

    wow! ! you are so young and talendted keep the good work! ! i loved the flow of the poem good job! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 23, 2008



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