Treasure Island

imnt alive

(18 june 2007 / jannat e hasin)

my first poem


I lost somewhere before u dream,
I lost somewhere before u dream.

D day u dream d day I lost,
D day u dream d day I lost


Its d day d dream come true



I lost in woods d fire beneath
Dreaming the eyes d dream come true,
D day u dream d day I lost,


I lost in world d world of souls,
No matter what u wear, what u eat,
It only matters what u did what u think,


I lost somewhere before u dream,
I lost somewhere before u dream.
D day u dream d day I lost,


Opens d heart in soul rest mind,
Opens d sky as a sapphire of life,
No more bondings,
No more relations,
No more feels,
No more heals,
No more limits,
No more hopes,




D day I become an independent being


Its d day d dream come true,
D day u dream d day I lost,

I lost somewhere before u dream,
I lost somewhere before u dream……

Submitted: Tuesday, December 30, 2008
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  • Tai Chi Italy (12/30/2008 12:11:00 PM)

    This sounds like you swallowed a rasta pill mon! Not bad for a first I suppose I will believe you.....I liked the repetition of I lost somewhere before u dream, it give the poem some structure and D Day is somewhere close by before u dream, Happiness in 2009 to you, may all your dreams come true, well the good ones....smiling at you, TAi (Report) Reply

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