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Julian Salvacion


My Forbidden Sea


Silence, an infinite melancholy
washed in waves over my seventh sea
voyaging to the abyss of my limit
emotion stood still, to sail no permit

Wind blew from the farthest north
embracing depths I could not fathom
the riddle of the waters starred with confusion
condemned a wandering soul to an infinite search

And beyond the tides, lay dreams concealed
glimmering first steps, devoured by fear
gone before the sun will see
the calmest wave of my forbidden sea

Submitted: Friday, November 07, 2008

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  • Rookie Min Sia (11/13/2008 12:16:00 AM)

    Very vivid words flowing so clearly...very imaginative...yet so sad. You wrote deeply..from personal experiences perhaps, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele (11/9/2008 10:45:00 PM)

    Julian - So sad, that your silence is an infinite melancholy. My silences are restorative and healing. But you express your deep abyss so well, I could get lost in those depths.

    Well penned dear sir - Cheryl (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kiran Raza (11/9/2008 9:19:00 AM)

    wow! ! ! ! !
    the way oyu write your poetry is amazing! ! ! !
    i am impressed with your words and emotions that oyu put in your poetry! ! ! !
    very well done! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bridgette Allison (11/8/2008 12:40:00 PM)

    this is the poem that caught my attention! your metaphors are very godly! very good poet! an instant classic in my book! ! ! extraordinaire! I am one your fans. Post some more poetry a 10** in my book! (Report) Reply

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