Me, Myself and I

Rookie - 318 Points (12 october 1974)

My Ghost - Poem by Me, Myself and I

My ghost…my conscience…
I hold you to me, and…
Begin to see you clearly….
The love that I lost…for I would still hug you dearly…
In this forgotten field of dreams,
Clouded… from all to see,
The rain, this loss, it's so painful to see,
Your face, it brings me to tears…
Will I ever begin to forgive myself…?
With every dropp I begin to fall,
Forever to spiral within turmoil,
The shadows still chant my name,
Day after day,
But at night, I still pray,
That I will someday see your face…
Happy…smiling, and away from this storm,
These thoughts wrench me away from this dream…
Forever and ever, what they mean? ?
Whatever…your face…it's still haunting, me…
This pain, the anguish I hold it makes my soul bleed,
As these thoughts they take me away,
To a place I had long forgotten,
A place where I'm always on my knees…
Our heaven,
Our hell,
My home…

Topic(s) of this poem: forgotten love, ghost, love and loss

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Me myself and I.

Comments about My Ghost by Me, Myself and I

  • Rookie - 489 Points Loppo Louie (7/14/2015 2:42:00 PM)

    A ghost of a conscience, a very good poem... (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,385 Points Rakhi Jayashankar (4/8/2015 8:23:00 AM)

    oh its really painful to part with our loved ones (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 877 Points marvin brato (10/20/2013 11:39:00 PM)

    Meaningful write..Liked it! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,821 Points Ramesh Rai (7/15/2013 9:19:00 PM)

    beautiful this write too (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,767 Points Patricia Grantham (6/27/2013 2:25:00 PM)

    Our conscience is with us day in and day out.
    We can never detach ourselves away from it.
    It will always be with us whether we like it or
    not. Things could be bad or good. Like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Anteaus Berryhill (12/2/2012 1:18:00 PM)

    Watsup I like this poem and it gives alot of thought on flashing back on memories of that person.But go to my page and check them out http: // (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 8, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 13, 2015

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