My Goal Poem by Queeny Gona

My Goal

Rating: 5.0


Change my heart oh god!
Let thy blood cleanse my soul,
Mold me in thy hands:
Create in me a new heart.
To lead a life as thy child;
To share your word with all,
Proclaim you as the lord almighty!
Thus lead your chosen people to thy way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 27 October 2009

nice poem prayer Queeny...cleansing all over there...i liked...10 please read mine- A Part Prayer Divine...it relates

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 October 2009

very grateful to be the 2nd to comment here!

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Surya . 27 October 2009

wonderful thought.wonderful poem voted10 surya

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Eyan Desir 30 October 2009

Me too, me too., me to nice write..

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Sathyanarayana M V S 30 October 2009

A very good composition Qeeny. A wonderful prayer.....Yes we join our voices too in your prayers....

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Valsa George 20 May 2017

God alone can transform us into better beings and cleanse us from our sinful state. We should also strive for such a regeneration ! A beautiful prayer!

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Siddartha Montik 18 December 2016

Wish I remember these lines as my Prayer! ! thanks for this Queeny! ! 10++++! !

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Sreejith Kulaparambil 22 May 2010

beautiful prayer... Gona... your short poems are excellent..... keep your style, its unique..

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Sam Ch 19 May 2010

Good Prayer that GOD also want from the same from ALL

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Shelly Shelly 04 November 2009

i do agree....it's really a nice prayer..nice meaning..and innocence build in..

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