My Heart Searches For "Ray Of Hope" Poem by M. Asim Nehal

My Heart Searches For "Ray Of Hope"

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A new day has come to life again
And has awakened some hopes
It gave liberty to the thoughts again
Now heart is searching new ray of hopes

Year after years are passing by
Found something and lost some things
To the heart we solace
Never give up the hopes within

Though truth is buried somewhere under the lie
Though wishes are crushed under the ritual customs
Though people are busy in showcasing
And their hearts have shrunk

Even time is playing a joke with us
By swiveling the needles on the clock
And showing new dramas
Year after the years

In this journey of life
The body has always fought
Without paying any heed to the heart
Then what's wrong if Heart searches for "Rays of hopes"?

Thursday, January 3, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: heart,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 03 January 2019

Coming of New day into life has very nice significance. New day motivates mind and beautifies life. Journey of life is definitely very interesting and we shall feel this life certainly. An interesting poem is excellently penned.10

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Mihaela Pirjol 27 February 2019

This poem is a poem of wisdom, of endurance, of faith, of guiding one's self by the interior whisper of one's heart: it is a poem of elimination, of purification, towards enlightenment!

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S H 04 March 2019

A wonderful qt. nice work.

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Gordon Walter 02 March 2019

This is one of your best poem I have read so far. Liked its wording and essence.

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Darren Jkoeryo 02 March 2019

Amusing poem...Then what's wrong if Heart searches for " Rays of hopes" ?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 March 2019

I concur with the wonderful and encompassing comments of Poetess Mihaela. The intricacies of life have been painted on the canvas of this moving poem.10++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 March 2019

A very inspiring poem full of wisdom and positivity. " Even time is playing a joke with us By swiveling the needles on the clock " Beautiful lines from a beautiful poem.

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