Johnathon Kaniarz (02-13-95 / Milan, Ohio)

I can really feel the emotion going into this poem. Of course to me it probably means something totally different than what it meant to you, but I still really like it nonetheless. You should try to translate these emotions into more pictures. You know like when you feel love, then later you recall that feeling you get some picture in your head, so where ever this poem came from, that memory, you should describe it more so I can see how you felt/feel even better. But just like the last comment keep writing! Never stop! There is no such thing as a bad poem, everybody just experiences everything differently so people connect to different things in different ways. Really like it though!

I kinda like this...and great poems are just songs w/out a
guitar accompaniment Keep writing :)