A moon lit night,
A little boat is waving,
A torn sail is dancing,
A dim hurricane is lighting,
Only a boatman on the boat,
Singing an old vaatially song,
Dreaming of his wife
Waiting for him in a hut,
This is about my imaginative life,
I don't know how It feels,
But my heart cries for it,
A simple life in naked eyes,
A complex struggle of life,
A complete satisfaction of soul,
With all joys and sorrows of life,
One can figure out a new taste,
A new man in a new world,
The world within this world,
Different from rest of it.
vivid imagination, well written poem, lovely to read..............10+++
The clear imagery reflects a clear longing for a peaceful space. May you find it. I enjoyed this very much.
stupendous written piece......great theme in clarity! ! ! 10
a dramatic life! a simple and clear perspective! I liked your life full of simplicity contrary to this complicated world well expressed. 10+++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good dream written out poetically. Nice writing bringing out usage of imagination that all readers can relate to. We all imagine and dream, that is where I get most of my material from. The mind is a wonderful thing to share. DC