My Individual Handsome God Poem by nimal dunuhinga

My Individual Handsome God

Rating: 5.0


I like to smile as you
But it's a cry
And I try to cry like you
Oh! It's a smile
And your curly gray beard
I love to grow on my pointed chin
But not that particular color.
At last I realized
You are a God!
And I am a Man.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 17 November 2009

You personalize your God with refreshing candor and humility. I particularly like his gray beard - that you reject so prettily. The theme of this poem is rich and reflective. You are a poet through and through. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 08 November 2009

To realize God is an awesome experience. Excellent.

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Romeo Della Valle 08 November 2009

What a beautiful poem dedicated to your creator, simple, but yet very deep and spiritual, deserving my vote 10+

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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