My Laptop And She Poem by S.D. TIWARI

My Laptop And She



Place she could sit, you have replaced.
Solutions for my leisure, you have traced.
She heated up laps and weight gave pain.
You are light and cool, can longer remain.

If involved in her, cut off from the world.
With you, always can get on to the world.
Even after given treats, she was smug.
It is enough for you, if you are plugged.

Dialling her number, waited for a long.
When press your button, you start along.
If you are charged, you do the work.
When she was charged, she was struck.

You solve my most problems like a genius
But seeing you on my laps, she’s zealous.
She is very proud of her being beautiful.
But I am proud of you for being you dutiful.

S.D. Tiwari
email sdtiwari1@gmail.com

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anshul Gupta 10 September 2011

Great poetry. I wud like to hear 'her' comments as well :)

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Saurabh Tiwari 09 August 2011

Awesome poetry......so true

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