My Little Blue Angel Poem by Sandra Martyres

My Little Blue Angel

Rating: 5.0


My little blue angel
He always watched over me
Right through my childhood
He kept me out of trouble
I always knew what to do
And when to do it
I was the envy of the class
With seemingly little effort
On my own part
I touched everyone’s heart

My parents told me
Never to fear the truth
As my little blue angel
Always knew what
I had or should have done
Sometimes it was not fun
It made other kids angry
For them I was a spoilsport
But even that did not deter me
From following him faithfully

Now I need to tell you
Who the little angel was
He was my baby brother
Who always smiled at me
His elder sister ever so lovingly
Until the day I saw Daddy
Take him away in a little box
And Mummy tearfully explained
That he had gone to heaven
As a little blue Angel to love and protect me.

(This story was told to me by a young girl)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 31 October 2009

Sandra, this is beautiful, poignant and heart wrenching poem. I hope that little blue angel still watches over her throughout her years to reminder what love is all about. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Ramesh T A 31 October 2009

From your poem it seems thoughts of little Blue angel cannot be erased in the mind forever shows how much his inspiration in you has embedded in the mind! It happens in many a people's cases!

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Rakesh Bedi 31 October 2009

very very poignant, sandra.....it touches all the emotional cords in the reader...thanks for sharing, dear....

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Kranthi Pothineni 31 October 2009

Cleverly presented. A touching and moving composition with a beautiful title.

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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

Wow, you have a tough job, don't you, though it might not appear so from the outside looking in. I want to thank you for sharing this story. Stories like this can change lives in a way that we would least expect, sometimes.

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Meggie Gultiano 07 November 2009

a very touching piece, Sandra. My heart and mind was glued in this write of yours words for words..I can also remember my parents and my elder sister.I know they are all watching over me.. thanks for sharing this lovely narrative write..

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Kesav Easwaran 02 November 2009

i have been noticing you trying to bring out imaginative pieces of late...and this one- another narration- certainly appeals...appealing to the soft sentiments of reader's heart...good work Sandra...10

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Sandra Fowler 01 November 2009

This story should touch the soul of everyone who reads it. I know that it has touched mine. Thank you, Sandra, for this luminous, inspiring piece.10/10. Love, SandraX

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Beautiful Sandra. It shows the love of family and trust in what we are told by our parents. I enjoyed your narrative and I know this poem will touch many hearts. love 10 Karin

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Prakash Mehra 01 November 2009

A perfect justice with the words and the emotions. Great work.

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