My Love Poem by exotic lokz

My Love

Rating: 5.0


i miss how u say i love u boo
n i miss how i say i love u too
cant u see boy u neeed to leave me
bee cuz ur love has a tight hold on me
i cant let go n i cant escape
theirs somethin about u that takes my breath away
im a sucker for love n im fallin for u n u fallin for me
we fallen for each other but u fallen faster than me
my love for u i know that its true cuz i could neva stop thinking bout u
u always in my mind every time i close my eyes ur face pops to mind
can it be true can it be u the one i spend the rest of my life with
ur a gift frm god frm the heavens above
ur the only one ill ever love
u n me were ment to be
i dnt need nothin more
just u mi amor

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 13 July 2012

A great love confession of love! It is touching and poignant! In a message, I would suggest you a few ideas to make this write more readable and powerful since you have most of the important elements need to make it catching and inspiring! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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