My Love On U Poem by krishna hyderabad

My Love On U



My life is like a river which flows ever
U are my lover I loves u forever
Sun rises and set everday but my love on u rises and never sets
Though I die my love on u never die and it always with u till the love ends in universe

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This my set propasal to my sweet girl which made her smile and then I got hug and kiss from her
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The comparison of river with love excellent and a perfect beautiful poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 20 November 2013

Wonderful, I love it, thanks. Love to Almighty. Please read my poems and say something.

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