My Love Secret Poem by Qistina Zaini

My Love Secret

Rating: 3.1


Think again and come to me!
Do you think i'm wasting my love for give it to you?
NO! ! ! !

You're wrong for thinking like that,
cause i LOVE you so much(don't you know?)
please, dear
think back,
cause it's hurt, when you disappointed all my love for you.

But, i will never stop! ! !
until i get what i want.
cause i belive believe in 'GOD',
HE will hear my prayer(day and night)

Honey
i will wait for you! !
until the day i die...................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Tyler 13 October 2005

Interesting use of contemporary language. A fascinating reference to God as well. I think there's more beneath the surface. Sincerely, Daniel Tyler

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 November 2009

Exalted love! Ten for that. Nice treat. Ms. Nivedita UK Please visit my poem with your comment and..... niv

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Chaotic Life - Curly M. 02 March 2008

great poem i loved it your love will come, i promise

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 16 February 2008

nice pen................

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Shiza Khan 12 January 2008

very passionate..it has the intense feeluings of loving sum1 with all ur heart.

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Charmaine Simpson 13 January 2006

Love is one of those emotions that is very borderline - With love always comes so much pain and heartache. Sometimes i wonder if the state of being in love is a good enough pay off for the flipside of lost love? ?

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