My Only Child Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

My Only Child

Rating: 5.0


Oh, my dear daughter
I really burst me into laughter
You were praising in hymns
My name was repeated by name

Oh, my lovely child
How could you become so kind?
You were naughty and careless
I always shouted you on face

How were they as colorful and magical words?
You sang for need to look always forward
I was moved at your simplicity
I saw clear reflection of almighty

My feet were dancing
Your words were really piercing
Touching my heart and making to weep
How lovely you looked and so happily to keep

Any mother on earth may feel
Special entity and super individual
Over the growth of children
To realize it all of sudden

You spoke of no difference
Between Him and me at once
Oh lovely child, you stole my heart
You were my precious part

I saw in you Divine reflection
I always loved secretly and had no reaction
I might have gone angry over some misdeeds
I had seen it as rare opportunity and need

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Oh, my dear daughter I really burst me into laughter

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Natasha M3 minutes ago I liked it but I feel there's lots of room for improvement

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Your child is you most wonderful gift to the world Steven Gress1 minute ago Thank you for sharing your poem. Comment +1 Father's love

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Rachel Chappell3 minutes ago Good job

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Nice Mendoza 2103 minutes ago I like it Comment 0 :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2013

Shi Ricks Walker, Yampriy Aashish and 2 others like this.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2013

Shi Ricks Walker, Yampriy Aashish and 2 others like this. Sukmawati Komala Thank you deary bro Hasmukh Mehta appreciate so much for this lovely poem wishing you all the best ever 6 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2013

Eyes Juwita Heart 6 hours ago · Like · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Great! Danielle Erin2 minutes ago I love the use of the child here, and the way you alluded to faith, but never had to mention it to get your point across. My favourite line was, my feet were dancing. Comment 0 good child

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi2 minutes ago well children are treasure and always child in the eyes of parents, well done poem

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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