Eyan Desir (caribbean)

What do you think this poem is about?

.. My Pen*********

Ideas small like tiny dots
Circulate to create
Greater thoughts
By using a pen.
They are constructed
From our head
the pen ejaculates
My every thought.

In sadness it comforts
In madness it bottles up
In love helps cough words
To put a flower in bed.

Throw away the knifes,
Don't take away life
Writers must always write
Poems that can change lives,
So People can realize
Using guns is unwise.

Love each other instead
Use the power in the pen
Talk about evil men.
I Wish they burn in hell!
Time up ring the bell!
Hope I wrote this well
Mightier than a sword.
The power in my pen

Copyright © ®2009, Eyan desire. All rights reserved

Eyan Desir
Submitted: Saturday, March 21, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, November 10, 2009

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  • thisoul ofmine (7/2/2009 8:18:00 PM)

    hmmm very thought provoking. an interesting read.10

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  • Raj Nandy (6/16/2009 11:20:00 PM)

    Yes, I do feel that you have written it well indeed!
    I saw a DVD Movie called the 'QUILLS' with Kate Winslet in it, do see it, you
    will like it! 10! - Raj Nandy

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  • sumaira .....ir (4/4/2009 3:19:00 PM)

    wonderful! !
    TRUE said...
    10/10
    lvu
    sumi

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  • Hazem Al Jaber (4/2/2009 6:36:00 AM)

    great pen that which you have..
    pen which supplied from a such loving heart..
    well done, , keep on..
    hazem al..

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  • Joscelyn Alderdice (3/30/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    Yes the pen is a great instrument indeed. This poem states it well. Awesome work!

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  • Ivor Hogg (3/28/2009 9:29:00 AM)

    THe pen is mightier than the sword and can be used for good or ill like all weapons or tools

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  • God's Angel Reason for the Season (3/28/2009 6:16:00 AM)

    Really Very Nice BoSss

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  • Terry Coates (3/27/2009 1:00:00 AM)

    This was a very very good poem how u use the pen to give your thoughts and to make the world a better place excellent job my friend.

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  • Serenity Prayer (3/25/2009 3:53:00 PM)

    i wouldof never had the idea to write a poem like this. great job.

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  • Xy-za Dile (3/25/2009 10:12:00 AM)

    such power of a pen can move a single soul.
    it is a beautiful write. =)

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