David DeSantis

Rookie (01/29/85 / Utica, NY)

My Personal Cocaine - Poem by David DeSantis

I’d love to swim in a sea of you,
Or Better yet
Your private sea.
For it’s quite amazing
how I feel nothing,
Unless of course it pertains to you.

You're like a stimulant without a pill,
A drug upon consumption
And its funny how when you leave
My nose bleeds a little.


Comments about My Personal Cocaine by David DeSantis

  • Rookie Sharon Goodwin (10/3/2008 3:00:00 PM)

    Damn! That sounds like a person I need. I like this one. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Emancipation Planz (6/22/2008 2:01:00 AM)

    I see the highlight.. where one must sniff....10derly... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie angelianne 1012 (6/19/2008 3:50:00 AM)

    great poem mate! ! ! ! ur addicted to that thing called 'love'..that is so cute..definetely deserves a 10.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (6/18/2008 9:19:00 PM)

    Amazing bro, absolutely amazing........may the highs of love bring shaky thighs and dizzy eyes.......You never fail to amaze me...many fine poets have come to live in you bro..*10+

    stacks of dishes

    Jon (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 57 Points Yuri Duraan (6/18/2008 11:08:00 AM)

    wow wow wow... (again) - this is not about lovemaking ALONE but also about sensual VERY intimate being together.... VERY good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 169 Points marvin brato (6/18/2008 6:27:00 AM)

    I believe so its a love poem.... much more a lovemaking! A 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -1 Points Ivan Donn Carswell (6/17/2008 3:53:00 PM)

    The nose-bleed metaphor has a certain poignancy - later, the physicality of love's expression moves beyond mere coke-like addicition. Rgds, Ivan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Onelia Avelar (6/17/2008 2:13:00 PM)

    Is this a love poem? It seems so -a weird love poem - I like the closing last line very much! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tara very irritated with PH injustice (6/17/2008 1:14:00 PM)

    An analogy perfectly carried through.... and I hope you get your next fix soon. :) t x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (6/17/2008 9:15:00 AM)

    Great poem David, love is the the best addiction to have,10
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tai Chi Italy (6/17/2008 8:39:00 AM)

    This is absolutely fabulous David and described exactly how having someone love you equally, makes you feel! I remember it well and can say that all adversity that I met along the way, was nothing with My Personal Cocaine by my side....love is a wonderful gift. Very inspiring too it seems! Smiling, having just finished my final exam and am a free as Tai can be. great first read of my day. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Original Unknown Girl (6/17/2008 8:29:00 AM)

    Sounds like you've been kidnapped by that thing called love! ! ! How divine, there's no better addiction, for sure... HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 17, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, September 26, 2011


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