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(01/29/85 / Utica, NY)

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My Personal Cocaine

I’d love to swim in a sea of you,
Or Better yet
Your private sea.
For it’s quite amazing
how I feel nothing,
Unless of course it pertains to you.

You're like a stimulant without a pill,
A drug upon consumption
And its funny how when you leave
My nose bleeds a little.

Submitted: Tuesday, June 17, 2008
Edited: Monday, September 26, 2011


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  • Sharon Goodwin (10/3/2008 3:00:00 PM)

    Damn! That sounds like a person I need. I like this one.

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  • Emancipation Planz (6/22/2008 2:01:00 AM)

    I see the highlight.. where one must sniff....10derly...

  • angelianne 1012 (6/19/2008 3:50:00 AM)

    great poem mate! ! ! ! ur addicted to that thing called 'love'..that is so cute..definetely deserves a 10....

  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/18/2008 9:19:00 PM)

    Amazing bro, absolutely amazing........may the highs of love bring shaky thighs and dizzy eyes.......You never fail to amaze me...many fine poets have come to live in you bro..*10+

    stacks of dishes

    Jon

  • Yuri Duraan (6/18/2008 11:08:00 AM)

    wow wow wow... (again) - this is not about lovemaking ALONE but also about sensual VERY intimate being together.... VERY good.

  • marvin brato (6/18/2008 6:27:00 AM)

    I believe so its a love poem.... much more a lovemaking! A 10.

  • Ivan Donn Carswell (6/17/2008 3:53:00 PM)

    The nose-bleed metaphor has a certain poignancy - later, the physicality of love's expression moves beyond mere coke-like addicition. Rgds, Ivan

  • Onelia Avelar (6/17/2008 2:13:00 PM)

    Is this a love poem? It seems so -a weird love poem - I like the closing last line very much!

  • Tara very irritated with PH injustice (6/17/2008 1:14:00 PM)

    An analogy perfectly carried through.... and I hope you get your next fix soon. :) t x

  • Lynda Robson (6/17/2008 9:15:00 AM)

    Great poem David, love is the the best addiction to have,10
    Lynda xx

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