My Poems Are So Airy, Poem by Liza Sud

My Poems Are So Airy,

My poems are so airy,
and Julia is their addressee.
They swing like cherries in the wind,
and melt in mouth like little strawberries.

It's only air that rules over our prayer,
and lifts it up, to heaven, to the air.
and there words themselves lead their life,
and only hearshot there, the touch of mind.

There legs are pull of heart, and hands of rhymes.
and there motif talks, not a prose line.
And all is ruled there by Light itself,
And it like Father answers and dictates.

and in that world without physical bugs
transforming is immidiate like laugh,
And like a glimpse of happiness through verse -
it's just the shade of dark what we enjoy.


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Какие у меня воздушные стихи,
и адресат их, Юля - ты.
Они качаются, как вишни, на ветру,
и тают, как клубниченки, во рту.

Лишь воздух наш молитвой управляет,
и в воздух вновь, на небо поднимает,
и там уже живут сами слова:
там только слух, касание ума.

Там ноги - тяга сердца, руки рифм,
там говорит не проза, а мотив,
там управляет всеми - только Свет,
диктует, отвечает, как Отец.

В том мире без физических помех,
преображение - мгновенное, как смех!
Так здесь мелькает счастье сквозь стихи,
и наслажденье здесь - лишь тень от тьмы.

Tuesday, April 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 21 April 2016

embrace all love see the perfection in it who cannot be fascinated by woman? revel in the shadow or light of love oneness of heart and mind

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Daniel Brick 19 April 2016

Events in this poem occur in a world set apart from mortal existence. Even the rare shadow is enjoyable, causes happiness, and because it is a spiritual environment transformations occur as effortlessly as laughter. WOW! Is this a way-station to Heaven or Heaven itself? In the first stanza, you identify your poems with sweet fruit, so wholesome they float up, up and away - to Heaven? It seems as if Poetry itself is your vehicle to reach Heaven. The prophet Ezekiel needed a fiery chariot; you only need words winging their well-known pathnto the Father and his Light. OR are these poems prayers that go to Heaven metaphorically, while you and J. remain on earth - but with the experience of Heaven inside your souls? The presence of God fully filling your beings?

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