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Jeline Loh

(6 September 1986)

My Sacrifice

Sitting here wondering what I would do for friendships
I would do much
I would go the extra miles just coz I love you
I would sacrifice my time
Suffer the consequences
Drowned in the difficulties
Though I am feeling tired
Though I want to give up
Though I want to break it
But I wouldn’t
Because I treasure you
You are imprinted in my heart
So deep is my feelings towards you
It seems like it was just yesterday
That we were best of friends
It seems that we had so much memory together
The bitter sweet ones
How could a sudden glimpse of an eye
We were distant now
I do not know what went wrong
Or how I even lost you
If I’ve done anything wrong
I ask for forgiveness
I might be a fool when I was younger
Being just too casual or flippant
But over the years
I have proven
Doesn’t my action speaks louder than my words
Doesn’t it shows how much I regretted
For causing us to drift apart
What could I do to get our friendship back?
I would do anything just to have it restored
I would love to have all things renewed
If it could fall in its place once again
Where I could find myself open to you
Instead of being only nice to you
Where I could be the one
To lend you my ears
To wipe your tears
To console you
To be your comfort
To laugh with you
To feel for you
To be with you
You are always in my heart
Nothing could take your place
How I love you my best friend!
Nonetheless I am truly happy for you
Happily ever after!

Dated 19th December 2011

Copyrighted @ Jeline Loh

Submitted: Monday, January 09, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, January 10, 2012
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