My Sister And I Poem by Megan Mayes

My Sister And I

Rating: 3.8


Skipping, dancing, all the day,
Laughing, singing, all for play.
Helpful hints along the way,
Seems to have a hint of play.
Love is what we both share.
We both love to show our care.
I love her and she loves me,
And that is all life needs to be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Philibert 06 August 2012

Good work, like the thoughts behind seemingly simple words

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 06 August 2012

a simple but beautiful poem on sisters! I love my sisters, biological as well as social, all over the world. For the content of this poem 10 ++++

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Jayne Davies 06 August 2013

A delightful poem! Well done!

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that is all there needs to be!

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 06 August 2014

This is a wonderfully nice sweet and short poem.

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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka 06 August 2014

Lovely poem to a sister.

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Francie Lynch 06 August 2014

Trite, at best. Seems to have a hint at play contradicts the first three lines of playing carefree. Go figure.

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Lyn Paul 06 August 2013

A joyful poem expressing all that Life needs to be. Love. Thank You Megan

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Babatunde Aremu 06 August 2013

Love is reciprocal. Nice poem.

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