My Sister's Watch Poem by Larry Schreckengost

My Sister's Watch

Rating: 5.0


Leaning against a maple red
Breathing crisp fall air
I strain to see through window's glare
And ever-present tear
As my sister cares for Father dear
Sharing gentler times, past and near
She sets aside anxiety
Calms her hidden fears
Then shows appreciation, for his paternal years
With muted dignity, he accepts his fate
And all that love him now await
But if his loss were daughter dear
On this, my thoughts are clear
He would rip the devil from his fiery lake
And wild and crazy promises make
Then hold his daughter oh so near
Whispering softly to her ear
The tender words she longed to hear

My Sister's Watch
Sunday, April 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death,dying,lost father,love and life,siblings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 02 December 2019

line 7: " lay" or " lays" or " laid" ? [ i think lays ] i'm not sure. dumb verb tenses! ! ! ! It's (for me) certainly a surprise (& stirring) ending. [NOT like stirring cake mix! ] I guess " Watch" does not refer to a timepiece on sis's wrist (as i thought it would) . To MyPoemList bri and..nice leaf :) :) p.s. " Jazib" seems to always want THAT poem read. (see J's comment) .

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 December 2018

Beautiful dedication to the sister. Touching and full of warmth. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 November 2018

Very impressive write, Larry Schreckengost. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Larry Schreckengost 24 April 2018

Dedicated to my sister Debbie, the heart and soul of our family. All my love

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 April 2018

Dear Larry, such a touching and heartwarming write👍👍👍

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