My Son The Phoenix Poem by Jeanne Cantkier

My Son The Phoenix



How many lifetimes to be reborn?
Every face filled with scorn.

Yet the damage put forth by your foe
fails to mar your beautiful soul.

One teardropp can heal our pain.
One more rebirth is another gain.

Your inner fire does build and strengthen,
until you burst free of your pain; and then

Be who you were destined to be.
See the life you were meant to see.
Before the Phoenix. When you were free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeanne Cantkier 07 May 2009

In the south (where I live) those two words rhyme... if said with a proper southern drawl. LOL Thanks for your comment! : -)

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Saadat Tahir 07 May 2009

Hi JC these are very potent lines really liked em...may have to work it a bit on the rhyme Yet the damage put forth by your foe fails to mar your beautiful soul. but its a neat likelable piece cheers

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