My Still Friend Poem by Oluwaseun Ogunbiyi

My Still Friend

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Several times I've come to see
The white man clad with stone
And there I sit beside his knee
Till night leaves us alone

Thus I touch his numbful cheek
And whisper words to thicken ears
But still I do not hear him speak
Then this increased my fears

What seems wrong with my very still friend
As tears bequeath my eye
But then he cracked till the very end
Without even saying goodbye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 04 February 2006

Such an insightful insight from one of color from a different cultural perception and understanding. And ironically these perceptions are administered in ways clearly understood by those who have true depths in feeling of what friendships mean. I don't necessarily agree that the subject of your poem deserves that kind of devoted admiration or glowing attachment. but as I said...we come from different 'implanted' understanding! Thanks for sharing...'My still friend' L

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Sallie Howson 04 February 2006

really good poem...thoughtful...shouldnt it be 'sit' instead of 'seat'?

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Seán O' Muiriosa 04 February 2006

Lovely poem - controlled but yet powerfully effective. Best wishes, Seán

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