My Those Precious Moments Poem by Amitava Sur

My Those Precious Moments

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O ‘ God You give me back those golden days,
What you snatched from me in those early days
You made me weeping for a few pence only
You robbed those thrilling moments off from me.


Now You give me, give me back
My all those lost out childhood days.
Those very loving, endearing and those precious moments.

Then I was unable to go to the circus in the village fair
And could not put on a dress I liked …of that knight’s attire.
I could not take even a snap, riding that white horse.
And all that I could not do, just for a few pence.

Being undone with poverty, my helpless poor loving dad
embraced me with his kind hands and said,
“ My son - one day you will get all of them,
Believe me, I swear “.

Times wheel started moving on
Days went … years past … decade also was over,
I grew to an eligible young man.
I am a smart executive now, with my car and costly suit and tie
I have a big AC chamber with my secretary Hi Fi.

But alas -
I’m unable to find that circus and that village fair anymore
And could not wear that dress to become a Knight for once.

Now, You are turning Your face replying nothing
O’ God – why You don’t answer me?
You give me back, my those lovely childhood days …
So loving, endearing and those precious moments.

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Amitava (5.03.2014) 12- 40 am

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Saturday, April 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 16 April 2014

The past is a country rolling away, and the future a station that's constantly grey. Like this, its filled with the yearning of yesterday but the cold acceptance of the present. Longing can be an incurable pain.

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Srabanti Guha 11 April 2014

I just loved this beautiful poem, the way you've expressed about missing those days in your childhood, is wonderful

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Yash Shinde 06 April 2014

..a passion filled poetry.I love your craving for those golden dayswonderful write.......... ............. ..I cordially invite you to read my poem- '...to bosom thee....I'll rise''..and ''never look like one''..plzz share your views in comments.....regards

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Roseann Shawiak 06 April 2014

Very beautiful poem, Amitava! ! You have expressed your feelings very poignantly. Our pasts improve with age it seems. RoseAnn

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