My Town Poem by Sheena Blackhall

My Town

Rating: 5.0


Huge juggernauts of oil ships
Cast garish lights over a black sea

The map of my city has changed
The shoreline bends like an iron bar
To accommodate mighty cruisers

But we live in hope
That the magician of public funding
Will pull a rabbit from the hat.
Without letting the cat out of the bag

We launch bottles stuffed with wishes
Hoping they'll come to land in the Central Belt
The fount of all the treats that go a-begging

Sunday, December 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: town
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
George Krokos 10 December 2017

The style really isn't much different than prose with a few line breaks. In the following lines it sounds as if you and those who are with you are just causing more pollution: - We launch bottles stuffed with wishes Hoping they'll come to land in the Central Belt -...........hmmm I wonder

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 December 2017

A beautiful write that vividly describes the town and its tormenting sight. It is commendable that its citizens are making efforts for its welfare....10

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